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The Thirsty Man

The Thirsty Man

By Ahmar saleemPublished 9 months ago 2 min read

The Thirsty Man

The sun blazed above the desert, a merciless ball of fire scorching everything beneath it. Jagged rocks shimmered in the distance, dancing illusions created by the heat. Among the waves of sand walked a man—lone, dusty, and drained.

His name was Karim. A traveler, once full of stories and laughter, now reduced to dry lips and trembling steps. He had underestimated the desert. What was meant to be a two-day shortcut turned into four, and now, his water was gone.

Each step was a battle. His backpack, once heavy with supplies, now hung loosely on his shoulder, carrying only the weight of regret. The sun didn’t pity him. Neither did the wind. It merely whipped sand into his eyes, as if punishing him for daring to survive.

His tongue stuck to the roof of his mouth. His lips were cracked, his skin peeling. His body screamed for water, but none was to be found. Every time he spotted a tree or a puddle in the distance, hope flared—only to be crushed by another mirage.

His thoughts began to fade. He remembered his village—the cool shade of the fig tree near his house, the sound of water from the clay pot his mother used to keep near the window. He remembered the laughter of his little niece as she splashed water from the river on hot days. It felt like another life.

A sharp pain in his leg pulled him back to the present. He had tripped on a buried rock. His knees hit the sand hard, but he didn’t get up. He stayed there, face buried in the burning ground, unable to move.

Tears welled in his eyes, but not one escaped. His body had no moisture left to give.

I don’t want to die,” he whispered hoarsely. “Not like this.”

But no one was there to hear.

Just as darkness threatened to swallow him, a soft sound tickled his ears—a faint trickle, almost like water. He didn’t believe it at first. Maybe it was the wind. Maybe it was hope playing tricks again. But it came again—clearer.

Karim forced his head up. There, beyond a small dune, something shimmered—not like a mirage, but more solid, more real. He blinked, crawled, dragged himself forward with the strength of desperation.

He reached the top of the dune and gasped. Below, nestled between rocks, was a tiny spring. Water bubbled up from the earth, pure and clear. A small cluster of palm trees shaded the area, like guardians of this miracle.

Karim laughed—a dry, rasping sound—but it was laughter all the same. He rolled down the dune, landing face-first into the oasis. He drank greedily, as if trying to fill every cell of his body with life again. The water was cool, fresh, alive.

As he sat there, letting the water cleanse his throat and his soul, he looked up at the sky. The same sun still blazed, but it felt less cruel now. He wasn’t angry at the desert anymore. It hadn't tried to kill him. It had tested him—and in doing so, reminded him of the value of life, of water, of every single breath.

He stayed under the shade of the palms that night, watching stars pierce the velvet sky. Tomorrow, he would find his way out. Tomorrow, he would live. But tonight, he rested—grateful, humbled, and reborn.

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