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Whisper in the crowd

Love find it's voice in silence

By Khubaib saeed Published 6 months ago 3 min read

Lena sat on the worn wooden bench at the edge of the park, the early evening breeze ruffling her hair. The sun was dipping low, painting the sky in shades of amber and lavender. Around her, the city hummed softly — distant cars, laughter from a nearby playground, the faint clinking of glasses from a street café. But inside her mind, there was a storm.

She had always believed that love was about grand gestures, passionate words, and sweeping declarations. Love was loud and unmistakable, like the crescendo of a symphony. But now, as she sat there watching the sunset, she was beginning to wonder if maybe, just maybe, love spoke a quieter language.

Across the path, an elderly man shuffled slowly, a cane tapping rhythmically against the pavement. His eyes, though cloudy, held a calm wisdom. He paused by the bench, nodded politely to Lena, and sat down with a sigh. They had never spoken before — he was just a familiar presence in the park, someone who came every evening, alone, as if the world outside didn’t quite reach him.

Lena glanced at him and smiled softly. Something about his peaceful demeanor made her feel less restless.

“Beautiful evening, isn’t it?” he said suddenly, his voice gentle but firm.

“Yes,” Lena replied. “It feels like the day is saying goodbye in its own way.”

He chuckled. “You know, I think love is like this evening sky. It doesn’t always shout. Sometimes it just shows up quietly, in moments you almost don’t notice.”

Lena looked at him, curious. “What do you mean?”

He tapped his cane thoughtfully. “My wife and I… we had been married for fifty years. For most of that time, we didn’t say ‘I love you’ often. We didn’t need to. We shared silences — long ones — that were full of understanding. It was in those silences that I found her voice, and she found mine.”

Lena’s heart tightened. “How did you know that silence was enough?”

He smiled, eyes crinkling. “Because silence, when it’s with the right person, becomes a language of its own. It carries everything words sometimes fail to say. Comfort, trust, companionship… and love.”

As the sun slipped below the horizon, Lena thought about her own life. She had been chasing love in all the wrong places — loud, dramatic, full of passion but also conflict and chaos. She had been searching for someone to tell her what she wanted to hear, someone who would fill the silence with promises and poetry. But what if she had it backward?

“Do you think love can grow even when people don’t speak?” she asked.

“Absolutely,” he replied. “I’ve watched couples who barely say a word but their hands find each other across a crowded room. I’ve seen friends who sit in silence for hours and somehow feel more connected than those who talk endlessly but never truly listen.”

Lena closed her eyes and breathed in the cool evening air. She remembered the way her grandmother and grandfather used to sit together, holding hands quietly in the kitchen, their eyes meeting without a single word. It was a silent conversation, but it was full of life.

“I guess I’m afraid of silence,” she admitted. “I always think it means something’s wrong.”

“Sometimes it does,” he nodded. “But sometimes, silence is a refuge. A place where love grows roots beneath the noise.”

The old man stood, steady despite his age. “Remember this,” he said softly, “love doesn’t always need to shout. Sometimes it just whispers, and if you listen closely, you’ll hear its voice in the silence.”

With that, he walked away, leaving Lena alone with her thoughts.

She stayed on the bench long after he left, watching as the first stars blinked awake in the deepening sky. Her heart felt lighter, as if a veil had lifted.

Over the next few days, Lena found herself paying attention to the silences around her — the quiet moments with friends, the pauses in conversations, the spaces between her own thoughts. She realized that these moments were not empty; they were full of meaning, waiting to be understood.

One evening, as she sat in a cozy coffee shop, her eyes met those of a man sitting across from her. He smiled shyly, and without a word, they shared a quiet moment of connection. No need for grand speeches, just the soft exchange of glances and the gentle warmth of presence.

In that silence, Lena heard the voice of love.

AdventureRomanceYoung Adult

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Khubaib saeed

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