Warning From the Future
Ominous microfiction challenge entry
By Paul StewartPublished 3 years ago • 1 min read
Photo by Breno Machado on Unsplash
I need to be brief. I only have fifty words to tell you the most important information you will ever get. The world you know is a lie. It is our fault. I’m sorry to say that it is coming and the only advice I can give is to run.
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Paul Stewart
Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.
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Comments (12)
Oh shit! It's about to go down in GM MC Paul-town! Love it!
Final word structure could be better. But good.
Oh, wow. You only had fifty words, but still managed to give me chills 😳
I'm a running....good job!
Ominous, succinct, leaving a whole lot of questions unanswered, most importantly, "Run where?"
Perfect.
Where shall we run? You forgot to mention where the danger is coming from. Would be nice to have some sense of direction :D
Ooooh, I like this!
I liked this! I found it funny!
Oh man! This grabbed my attention right away, and then left me looking for the next part. Wonderfully gripping and mysterious :)
Very kool piece Paul! you have me intrigued! I need more info! Will there be a Part 2?
Ahhhhhh I love this!! 👏👏👏 And yes, I counted the words hahaha couldn’t resist 🤣