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The Stranger Who Waited in the Rain

Sometimes, the kindness we ignore becomes the miracle we were praying for

By Wings of Time Published about a month ago 3 min read

The Stranger Who Waited in the Rain

Rain hammered the streets like a thousand tiny drums. People rushed into shops and under roofs, trying to escape the sudden storm. But amid the chaos stood a girl named Hiba, drenched from head to toe, clutching a broken umbrella.

Her bus had left.

Her phone battery was dead.

And she had no way home.

She wiped rain from her face and whispered,

“Ya Allah… why today?”

For weeks, life had been nothing but tests. Her exam results were delayed, her mother was sick, and she had missed two job interviews due to transport problems. And now this—stranded alone in the storm.

Cars splashed water as they passed, people pushing past without a glance. No one stopped. No one cared.

Except one man.

Across the road stood a stranger wearing a long black coat, holding a big umbrella. He looked around quietly, then his eyes landed on her. He watched her for a moment—not in a creepy way, but as if he was trying to understand whether she was okay.

Before Hiba could react, he stepped off the curb, crossing the road through the rain.

“Are you alright?” he asked gently.

She forced a smile. “I’ll be fine.”

He knew she was lying.

The man extended his umbrella over her.

“You’ll catch a fever. Can I help?”

“No, I don’t want to bother you,” she said.

“You’re not,” he replied softly.

Something in his voice felt sincere.

He introduced himself.

“My name is Daniyal. I’m waiting for a cab, but the rain has blocked the roads. If you want, we can wait here under the shed.”

Hiba hesitated.

The world taught her not to trust strangers.

But the storm was too strong, and she was freezing.

So she nodded.

For the next several minutes, they stood quietly under the small shed. Daniyal didn’t ask personal questions. He didn't stare at her. He simply stood, shielding her from the rain whenever the wind changed direction.

After a while he said, “You look tired. Long day?”

Hiba sighed.

“Long month.”

She didn’t know why, but the words poured out.

She told him about her mother, her struggles, her hopes of getting a job, and how everything felt like it was falling apart.

Daniyal listened without interrupting.

And then he said something unexpected:

“You’re stronger than you think. Allah tests the ones He wants to raise.”

Tears filled her eyes.

No one had said anything kind to her in weeks.

Just then, Daniyal’s phone buzzed.

He answered, stepped aside for a moment, then returned.

“My driver is near. He’ll take you home.”

“What? No, no—I can’t take your car!” she protested.

“It’s okay,” he smiled. “I don’t want you walking home in this rain.”

“But why are you helping me?” she whispered.

Daniyal paused, then said:

“Because once, years ago, I stood exactly where you’re standing now. And someone helped me. I’m just returning the favour.”

Something inside her softened.

The car arrived. A clean black sedan. The driver stepped out respectfully.

Daniyal opened the door for her.

“Go home, Hiba. And don’t lose hope.”

She sat inside, still unsure if this was real.

“Thank you… truly.”

He nodded, closed the door, and stepped back into the rain—

but this time, without the umbrella.

He held it out for her instead.

As the car drove away, Hiba looked back.

Daniyal stood there, letting the rain soak him completely, yet smiling as if the storm didn’t matter.

A Week Later…

Hiba arrived at the hospital with her mother, who suddenly needed urgent treatment. The receptionist told her the fees were high—too high.

Hiba’s heart sank.

But then the receptionist said,

“Your bill is already covered.”

“What? By who?”

She pointed toward a man speaking to the doctors.

It was Daniyal.

Not just a stranger…

but the owner of the hospital.

Hiba froze in shock.

Daniyal turned and smiled softly.

“Allah sent help when I needed it. Now it’s my turn.”

Tears rolled down her cheeks.

That day, she realised—

sometimes the miracle we pray for is a stranger waiting for us in the rain.

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Wings of Time

I'm Wings of Time—a storyteller from Swat, Pakistan. I write immersive, researched tales of war, aviation, and history that bring the past roaring back to life

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