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“The Room with No Name”

– PART 1

By Randolphe TanoguemPublished 6 months ago 2 min read
“The Room with No Name”
Photo by 🐣 Luca Iaconelli 🦊 on Unsplash

She walked into the room like a question begging to be answered.

Barefoot, half-robed, skin tasting of lavender and doubt. Her name was Elizabeth — soft lips, storm eyes, and a tension in her step that betrayed everything she tried to hide.

He waited at the center of the room.

Not on the bed.

Not leaning against the wall.

He stood — still, grounded, inevitable — like the silence in a cathedral before the sermon begins. His name was never spoken aloud. She simply called him “Sir.

No script. No commands.

Only that gaze.

That knowing.

The kind of look that doesn’t ask: “Can I?

It declares: “I’ve already seen what you hide — and I’m not moving.”

She hovered in place, unsure of her body.

“You want to be a good girl,” he said calmly.

“But I didn’t invite her tonight.”

Her breath caught. A shiver of forbidden electricity slid down her spine. Her lip curled, resisting — but her thighs betrayed her.

“I invited the other one,” he continued.

“The one you chain in the back of your mind.

The one who begs to be used… and still be worshipped.”

Silence.

Her eyes dropped, then rose like a hunted animal pretending not to be prey.

He stepped forward once — just once — and the room tilted.

“Show me,” he said, voice like velvet wrapped around steel.

“Show me the girl who likes to be ruined — and forgiven.”

Her shame tried to surface.

But his stillness was louder.

His breath, unshaken.

No judgment.

No ego.

Only ritual-level presence — as if this wasn’t a game, but a sacred summoning.

She dropped her robe.

And then… she dropped her mask.

Her hands moved between her thighs — but not for pleasure.

For offering.

“I’m… filthy,” she whispered, tears threatening.

He smiled — not with mockery, but with recognition.

“No,” he said.

“You’re sacred.

And tonight, your filth is the altar.”

He knelt, not to worship her body — but to claim her soul.

She came undone.

In breath.

In voice.

In form.

What she thought was her darkest self was now a portal.

And only one man could enter without flinching.

When it was over — when her body trembled and her mind was emptied — she looked up and asked:

“How did you know I wanted that?”

And he replied:

“I didn’t.

But I knew you needed someone who wouldn’t run when you showed me.”

To be continued… (See Part 2)

AdventureFantasyFictionHealthMagical RealismMysteryNonfictionPart 1PlayPlot TwistPoetryRevealRomanceSelf-helpThrillerYoung Adult

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Randolphe Tanoguem

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