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The Rider

Jean-Michel Basquiat (for the Raymond G. Taylor Art Chapter Challenge)

By Kendall Defoe Published about a year ago 3 min read
Riding with Death (one of Jean-Michel Basquiat's last paintings, 1988)

Note: this is for the art-inspired challenge of Raymond G. Taylor.

Part I – Kenopsia

“the eerie atmosphere of a place that is usually bustling with people but now abandoned”

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The Rider sits alone.

And he feels so alone right now.

As he stares off into the void, the rider understands somewhere deep inside that he is truly all alone here, whatever here is supposed to be.

This place was still his home.

The light was very dim, settling into a dull brown shade that seemed to sink into his soul. No clouds or real sky around him as he tried to find a way forward. It was almost impossible to see ahead of him, behind him, or the very ground that he was riding on.

Well, at least he did not have to set his feet on it.

He was the rider who found his own way through…this.

It was a perfect relationship.

As the journey continued, he felt the bones beneath him shift, separate, reattach, and then come apart again, with every single gallop and step. The only thing that bothered him was not knowing the name of this particular creature. There was never any real talk or discussion about what to call this thing that had carried him for centuries. There were no tags or labels to make it clear that it was even supposed to be ridden by him. But, there had been no difficulties on this journey. There were no surprises that upset the pair of them.

Until today…

That feeling of loneliness… It just would not leave him alone. It was like he felt hunger that would not be satisfied by any meal he could name. That was a strange feeling to have, since he did not eat, but it was one that he knew from those others on his way. They were the ones who were not here.

They were the figures he missed.

They spoke of “last meals” and “dying wishes” as though there were something special about them. Strange, once again, to consider that he could take any knowledge from them. Why would they impart such wisdom to a skinny rider and his bone machine?

And suddenly, he knew how to take care of that unsettling feeling.

There would be more of them.

From the top of his head, he felt that the change was going to be subtle and then…uncontrollable. More of the faces and images from his past came back to him. There were the ones who were crying, screaming, moaning and laughing in his face. There were others who simply disbelieved that they could meet him on this plain. And some who did not even have a face. Not one eye on him…

They would be back.

He felt the bones of the rider under him reform and separate as they continued to move.

Good boy…

It would not be fair of him to give up on finding another one if that left his rider just meandering from one dull place to place. The beast was still strong, still willing to carry him on his back, and still willing…to take on new passengers.

Yes, he would have to do this for the beast.

The air was cleaner and sharper as he massaged the flanks of the beast. There would be a happy ending to this and he would not feel lonely anymore. And he would begin to start right now.

Jean-Michel with Jean-Michel

Footnote to this intro:

I have contributed a lot of pieces to this page, but this challenge is a real challenge for me. My intention is to write a book about Death encountering various figures throughout history. I will limit it to a list of twelve well-known names (arts, science, literature, etc.) and have an interesting term at the beginning at each chapter related to the subject. It will be my own particular ideas about what these people mean to Death and their world. And it is just fantasy (I will not be dealing with the straight truth with my work).

He knew...

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  • John Coxabout a year ago

    Death is a rich subject and should yield a fascinating novel. This chapter excellently sets the stage for the novel to come. The plane of existence, the beast and death are all mysterious, unknown and seemingly unknowable. Fascinating premise!

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Such a splendidly engaging piece and so imaginatively creative, too. Congratulations on winning a runner up spot with Raymond's challenge.

  • Raymond G. Taylorabout a year ago

    Wonderful choice of artwork, artist and vivid descriptive of the work, along with your fascinating angle and interpretation, bringing in fact, fiction and fantasy all in one glorious heady cocktail. Really well done. Thanks for supporting the challenge and I will look forward to looking at this work again and in more detail. Apologies again for the time to respond.

  • Annie Kapurabout a year ago

    The descriptions in this piece are fascinating. I love the atmosphere of it. Brilliant!

  • Testabout a year ago

    You have captured the essence of "The Rider." And brought it to life even though death is the obvious theme. I look forward to your exploration of death—a many-faceted metaphor.

  • When I saw Kenopsia, I remembered my poem Kalopsia. I learned a new word from you today. I'm looking forward to reading the others you have planned in this series!

  • Vicki Lawana Trusselli about a year ago

    This is brilliant Ina short essay

  • Skyler Saundersabout a year ago

    This piece expounds upon the ideas of death and the brilliance of Jean-Michel Basquiat. You illustrate a portrait with prose that is loaded with solemnity and the poet’s touch when you say, “He felt the bones of the rider under him reform and separate as they continued to move.” I will be sharing. -S.S.

  • Mark Gagnonabout a year ago

    Bones coming apart and reconnecting created great imagery and you created the feeling of emptiness superbly. It will be an interesting book, Kendall.

  • Rick Henry Christopher about a year ago

    This is an absolute masterpiece Kendall. Every word and every line fits together so perfectly.

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    I very much enjoyed the fantasy angle you took here. Best of luck with the book idea! You can do it!!!

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