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"The Last Voyage of the Ardent"

Whispering of the sea

By Beau JeffriesPublished about a year ago 4 min read
"The Last Voyage of the Ardent"
Photo by Jamie Morrison on Unsplash

The Ardent was a sturdy old fishing trawler that had been through a lot of hard work and rough seas for years. Captain Jonas Gray, an aged man with a salty beard and eyes that had seen more storms than they should have, was proud of it. Six members of the crew trusted him implicitly after years of sailing together. They had laughed, fought, and spent long nights under the stars together, but nothing could have prepared them for this last journey. The early morning fog rolling in off the Maine coast started it like any other. As it left the dock, the rusted hull of the Ardent cut through the chilly Atlantic waters, making a creaking sound. The usual banter was replaced by a tense silence among the crew. They were chasing rumors of a fishing ground with riches beyond imagination and were traveling further out than ever before. In the taverns, Captain Gray had overheard whispers about a secret fish-filled bank. He decided to take the risk because the Ardent needed expensive repairs and fishing had been poor this season. The Ardent's mood deteriorated over the course of the days. Their heavy coats were ripped apart by a brisk wind and ominous clouds as the weather changed. The captain's decision to sail so far from familiar waters began to be questioned by the crew. Jack, the crew's youngest member, expressed his concerns first. When he joined The Ardent, he was just a young boy who was eager and had big dreams. Now, the ferocious waves have submerged those dreams. One night, Jack said, his voice barely audible over the howling wind, "Captain, this feels wrong." "We ought to turn around." Captain Gray's eye became fixed. "Jack, we've come too far. We will discover what we are seeking. Trust me." However, trust was deteriorating. Men could be worn down by the sea, and the endless gray horizon was no consolation. Small disagreements escalated into heated arguments as tensions rose among the crew members. The group, which had been close, began to break up. They found it on Day Five—the fishing ground that the captain had promised. The water was life-filled and dark, almost black. Their silver scales glistened in the murky depths as huge fish that they had never seen swarmed beneath the surface. The crew put in a lot of effort, bringing in a lot of catch in nets. It appeared for a brief moment that the captain's bet had paid off. However, the sea is a shaky master. The weather got worse as the Ardent's bounty got heavier. The wind howled like a banshee and the sky took on a vengeful purple hue. The boat was hit by waves that were as high as houses and threatened to capsize it. The crew tried their hardest to keep their haul, but the storm kept coming. A sudden, loud crack could be heard in the air. Splinters flew as a result of the main mast snapping. Everything changed as soon as the Ardent violently slid to one side. Chaos reigned as the crew tried to regain control. Jack saw something that shook him to his core in the midst of the panic. Standing at the deck's edge and looking out at the storm was Captain Gray, the man who had always appeared to be invincible. He had wild eyes that were filled with acceptance as well as fear. "Captain!" Jack screamed, but the roar of the storm drowned out his voice. Captain Gray gave him a sad grin as he turned to look at him. He mumbled, "I'm sorry, Jack," but the wind swept the words away. He then abruptly stepped over the edge. It appeared as though time had stopped. Jack was horrified as the captain vanished into the raging sea and was swallowed whole by the vengeful waves. The crew rushed to the area where he had jumped into the water, but they were powerless. He had been taken by the sea. The Ardent was a shattered, battered wreck by morning after the storm continued all night. With the knowledge that they had lost more than just their captain, the crew, exhausted and distraught, could only stare at the endless horizon. Jack stood at the bow, his eyes scanning the water, as the sun rose and painted the sky gold and pink. As if the storm had never happened, the ocean was now calm. But Jack was right. Captain Jonas Gray and a portion of the Ardent's soul had been taken by the sea. The weight of their loss was heavy in the air as they silently sailed back to shore. The crew broke up when they got to the dock, and each man went his own way, haunted by the memory of that last trip. The Ardent never returned to sailing. It was abandoned at the dock as a ghost ship with its decks empty and its rusting hull. Also, it was said that the captain's voice could still be heard whispering to the sea that had taken him on quiet nights when the wind was right. But Jack was right. The sea never fulfilled its promise.

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Beau Jeffries

My name is Beau Jeffries and I am a passionate singer and songwriter and also have a knack for creative writing and a deep love for the creative arts. With a versatile talent for blending melodies and crafting lyrics.

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