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Raw thrill Before the End

Chapter one

By Karan w. Published about a year ago 3 min read

One day, Peter was wandering through the forest as he usually did. Today, however, he walked much further into the forest, driven by a sudden curiosity. “Why not explore deeper into the woods?” he thought. He wanted to see what secrets lay hidden in the forest’s depths. "Does anyone live there? But who would live so deep in the forest?" he wondered to himself.

Lost in his own imagination, the boy ventured further into the dense woods, where massive trees stood towering overhead. Their thick canopies blocked out the sky, allowing only a faint light to trickle through the branches. The darkness of the forest brought Peter a strange sense of peace, and his excitement was at its peak.

There was no sound now; the forest was silent and dark, creating an atmosphere that could frighten any child. Yet Peter wasn’t scared. Instead, he was eager to uncover something new in the forest’s depths.

As he ventured further, his eyes caught sight of what seemed to be the shape of a hut. He moved closer to get a better look and realized it was indeed a small hut. He could hardly believe it.

“Amazing! Truly incredible! Does someone actually live here, in such a dark forest? I can't believe it!” he exclaimed to himself.

Without hesitation, Peter stepped inside the hut, but no one was there. Suddenly, a voice called out, “Welcome, little visitor!”

The voice came from behind the hut. Peter quickly walked around to see who it was.

There stood an old man, his hands covered in paint. The old man smiled at Peter and said in a hoarse voice, “Welcome to this desolate, dark forest, my little guest!”

Peter stood silent for a moment before asking, “Do you live here all alone?”

“Yes, I live here all by myself,” the old man replied with a chuckle.

The old man was working on a painting, which was quite large.

“Are you an artist?” Peter asked curiously.

“Yes, my little guest. Do you like painting?”

“I have no experience with it. This is the first time I’ve seen someone painting in person,” Peter replied.

“You are very honest,” the old man said with a gentle smile.

“My grandmother taught me to always be honest in life,” Peter said. “She said God becomes angry if we are not truthful.”

At this, the old man laughed loudly but said nothing further.

“What are you painting?” Peter asked with growing curiosity.

“You’ll understand once it’s finished. Until then, just watch quietly,” the old man replied.

“Alright,” Peter agreed.

Peter sat down beside the old man and watched him paint. He soon became so engrossed in the painting’s mystery and beauty that he lost track of time. The forest, already dark, began to grow even darker as the sun dipped below the horizon. The old man lit an old lantern to continue his work.

As time passed, the lantern’s flame dimmed, but the old man remained deeply absorbed in his painting.

Finally, the old man noticed Peter still sitting nearby. “You’re still here, little one? You should head home now. Your parents must be looking for you,” he said.

Peter snapped out of his daydream and looked around. It was pitch dark. He bid the old man farewell and promised to visit him again the next day.

The old man decided to accompany Peter partway, as the boy had a long journey home through the dark forest. When they reached close to Peter’s house, the old man bid him goodbye and vanished back into the dense woods.

Peter had invited the old man to visit his home, but the old man politely declined, saying he would visit another time.

Before leaving, the old artist placed a hand on Peter’s shoulder and said, “Every time you return, this forest will offer you something new. Just follow your heart.”

A/N:- I know that many of my stories feature an old man, perhaps even an artist. But this time, have a little patience; I'm about to shock you in a very unexpected way. Please wait for the next part.

AdventureFantasyFictionMysteryPart 1Plot TwistThrillerChildren's Fiction

About the Creator

Karan w.

Writer || Poet || Author

Author of "The Resonance–Two Together-Lost Forever

 All worlds collapse the moment they touch the ground of reality—worlds I once created. Yet I find my bliss in the dissolution of my creations

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  • Caitlin Charltonabout a year ago

    The way you described how the canopies blocked out the sky was great, I could feel that strange sense of peace and excitement that Peter was feeling. There’s something about painting deep in the woods with a lantern lit, it must be therapeutic. I am imagining it, I’ve never done it before, besides the fact that I can’t paint to save my life lol. The forest will offer him something new every time he visits (such a great way to end part 1)… it sounds awesome, but it’s making me think we won’t see him again, but I could be totally wrong. I am enjoying this so far 👌🏽👏🏽♥️

  • I wonder who is that old man, why is he living deep in the forest and what is he painting. Can't wait for Chapter 2!

  • Komalabout a year ago

    Ohhh, I’m hooked! The mysterious old artist, the eerie yet enchanting forest—such a vibe! Hurry up with part two—don’t keep us waiting!👏✨

  • Ali Sadeek Ahmedabout a year ago

    BRAVO

  • Maryam Batoolabout a year ago

    This is such a cozy and magical story! Woah, when peter, out of nowhere said, “My grandmother taught me to always be honest in life,” Peter said. “She said God becomes angry if we are not truthful.”, that was so cute, spellbinding my attention into the story more. These tiny details are what make a story standout. The ending was a real fun! I'm curious what did the forest offer him this time? It is a mystery and warm story for sure! Now, I really wanna read the "Chapter 2" ✨😃🤝

  • Maryam Batoolabout a year ago

    Let me just laugh at; "Chapter One" already! Then I'll read the story 😂😆 Chapter 2 ain't gonna upload ever 😆🤭

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