
In the late hours of a hot summer day, two foe warriors lay on a bloodied war zone. Each has mortally injured the other, and has misplaced their quality to arrive the lethal blow. Depleted, sweating, and rapidly losing blood, they sit up against inverse trees and confront each other.
One bears a ruddy sigil over his chest and rests in the shade of his powerful oak. The other shows a blue peak over his bear and develops powerless underneath the arms of a willow.
The warrior wearing a ruddy sigil gradually expels a write and paper from his handbag, wipes the sweat from his forehead, and squints at the clear page.
“What are you doing?” the warrior with a blue sigil inquires.
The ruddy warrior looks up at his foe.
“I’m composing my passing poem,” he answers.
“What will it be?” asks the blue one.
The ruddy trooper delays for a minute, shakes his head, and answers,
A ruddy setting sun
Clears absent the powder-colored trees
It is a shinning day
Katsu!
The blue-crested officer considers a minute and his confront wrinkles in appall.
“Why, that’s no lyric at all,” he says, rearranging his fingers.
“How can you say such a thing?” the ruddy warrior scoffs, “I do not accept that you would be a poet.”
“Maybe not,” blue says, “but indeed so I might do way better than that.”
“Oh yeah?” ruddy chuckles, “and how’s that?”
“Well,” blue shrugs, “Are you composing a Haiku or a Tanka? Your organizing doesn’t take after the rules of either. You’re squandering syllables on words such as ‘it’ and ‘is’ and ‘a’. And ‘Katsu’? Are you reproving the peruser? Claiming triumph? Reviving somebody? Accomplishing edification? No, no sense at all. The word has numerous distinctive implications, and I don’t see any of them as suitable here.”
“Perhaps it is gathered I have ended up enlightened,” ruddy contends, getting to be irritated at the strong criticisms.
“Ha!” yells the blue warrior with an additional pump of blood from his wounds, “as if anything were to be deduced from such spill. Attempt again.”
Disgruntled, the ruddy warrior scratches out the content of his to begin with sonnet and starts once more:
My blue enemy
Speaks as in spite of the fact that he knows what’s wise
What an idiot
“Amusing!” the blue warrior snickers, “if as it were you didn’t squander your time and ink on such an offended. Your joke is way better composed this time, however appears a need of capacity to summon something of noteworthy reflection.”
“Be this lyric recollected for all of time, you stay the snickering stock!” ruddy boasts.
“Is that so? Or is it the child whose final ink was went through in seethe since he couldn’t handle a touch of critique?” blue fires back.
“Enough!” the ruddy one says, “I might compose another, and this one will unquestionably awe your horrendously fanatical mind.”
The ruddy warrior burrows inside his imaginative awareness, wrinkles his sweating confront, and centers on the paper, quickly jotting down his unused passing sonnet. One that will without a doubt be recalled for a millenia or more. One that will put him among the stars with the most prominent passing poets.
Red sun sets
Across the forest
And casts shadows
Across my ridiculous gown
And Katsu!
“No, stop!” the blue warrior cries out, “no great! The redundancy of ‘across’? ‘Katsu’ once more? Utilizing the word ‘and’ not as it were once but twice? You’re squandering syllables and boring me tremendously.”
“Again!” the ruddy warrior yells back, “it is you who squanders time and vitality! Criticizing my each word and judging my composing! So what if my creation is an offended to you, an tribute to my fights, or a adore letter to the moon? It might be anything I need it to be!”
“It may be, but maybe it ought to too be good?” the blue warrior inclinations, “be unique, and be concise!”
“Beautiful dialect does not permit one to be concise,” ruddy says.
“One does not construct a bridge to wind around the waterway, but to cross it straightforwardly. Magnificence determines from the control in what is said with few words.”
“But there is so much to say.”
“Cut the overabundance. In managing with shape, there are word restraints.”
“You appear very resolved around this,” the ruddy warrior wipes a blend of sweat and blood from his forehead, “perhaps you ought to type in a sonnet to demonstrate me wrong.”
“I would as it were empower you to progress your aptitudes instep of endeavoring to take mine.”
“Steal yours?” ruddy lets out a full-bellied chuckle, “don’t compliment yourself so much!”
“It would be a pitiful day if a awesome writer such as yourself would have to take the credit of such a humble warrior like me,” blue says, looking down and absent at the ground.
“Ah, sufficient, my adversary and pundit. I will grant no feel sorry for and I have squandered sufficient of my vitality on dissatisfaction with you. I will type in another sonnet, and I will compose almost something I really love.”
This time, the ruddy warrior reflects and considers for a awesome period of time, looking profound inside himself for the right words to spill out on the page. All of a sudden, with an effort of covered up soul, he picks his write back up and composes out the sonnet:
If I adored the moon
Why as it were see where sun shines
Night brings excellence, too
Breathing in profound with sentimentality and the productive recollections of considering the moon as a child, the ruddy warrior finds peace inside himself. He faculties the feeling of fulfillment as of now discharging the pressure in his muscles, and gives way to the breeze of passing beneath his forceful oak tree. Nearly promptly, the blue warrior sways forward and drags his injured self over the soil to the body of his rival. He takes the naturally composed passing lyric in his hand, slithers back to his sobbing willow, and signs his title upon the paper.
In the shade of the hanging branches, the blue warrior grins at the material in his hands as passing comes for him, too.
“What a incredible poem.”
About the Creator
Shams Says
I am a writer passionate about crafting engaging stories that connect with readers. Through vivid storytelling and thought-provoking themes, they aim to inspire and entertain.



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