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Beneath You

"Come in if you dare"

By Cryptic EdwardsPublished 3 months ago 2 min read

Written by Cryptic Edwards

Chapter 1-

As she enterd, what is calling her, a feeling of curiosity, knowing what curiosity will bring her and the dangers of this she should be careful!

Sharing her spiritually awakening with him, the man with long blonde hair, glasses and eyes glaring at her with his a creepy smile. This could have been her sacred error or her mistake, if she was not a few years already aware, her inner thought, her inner voice, telling her to

"Stop, stop, stop sharing"

Indeed, she could not help it, she wanted to see if she was right about what was going to happen in this tent, as well as a test to herself to see if her brain and her body through everything could handle something like this and bring her back, so she did.

After-all she was very curious with his words,

"That inner voice I will turn it off"

She thought herself,

"Everyone needs that inner voice, shut it off completely, sound like madness"

She entered anyway with her red blanket, with beautiful earthly patterns, simply lay down on the earth ground in the tent, where the sense of feeling spirituality safe was there with her crystal rings, crystal necklace and crystals in her pocket, feeling no matter what, she will be safe regardless because with these she was protected.

She had no idea what would be coming her way a such and she would enter a trance so much to speak, but for her well she was open till she was not, her energy would pull her in.... and was no longer open to this...

Slowly as she was laying there, grounding herself and relaxing as she started hearing lots of movement happening, people entering, people just as curious as her, but not aware. She could feel so many people just there to listen to this man words, and a trance they all agreed to be in, not realising these sort of things do exist and can be dangerous. He would bring them in his work, rush around with his words what they are there for, but she knew he was a cult leader she felt it, she saw it and she knew it!

His words still shivers to the back of her spine after that day.

Raising his arms

"That inner voice you have, I will switch it off" he saids to everyone

Yes she knew the characteristics of a cult leader but she knew most of these people did not, She just had to go in and experience this for herself.

As she close her eyes with everyone else, the journey began, she thought to herself with her eyes shut tight.

"Why did I think it was a good idea to do this"

but the tent was zipped up, darkness it was and far too late to leave, she was in with everyone else, the countless of people there were, all laying back.

She could feel the energy shifting to something not as sacred, as she heard the drums and his voice changing to a deeper tone as as he spoke.

Next

She could feel him beneath her.....

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About the Creator

Cryptic Edwards

Cryptic Edwards is a writer exploring the hidden depths of human experience through fiction, life writing, poetry, and performance.

Drawing on techniques such as soul writing, dream work, method writing

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  • Finn Dennis K.3 months ago

    I can see the concept you have for the story. Sure, there is room for improvement, but its potential is just as great! Keep up the work, I know you'll improve as you go 😉

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