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Trial by Fire and Lingering Frustrations

A review on "Pride"

By Morgana SteelePublished 10 months ago 2 min read

Rachel Vincent's "Pride" escalates the stakes for the protagonist, placing her on trial for her life within the rigid confines of her werecat society. Accused of infecting and killing her human ex-boyfriend—capital offenses in their world—she faces a grim fate. Yet, even as her life hangs in the balance, a rogue Stray terrorizes the mountainside, forcing her to juggle her own survival with the protection of a vulnerable teenage tabby.

Vincent masterfully weaves together legal drama and action-packed suspense. The protagonist's trial, a high-stakes battle against prejudice and political maneuvering, provides a compelling backdrop for the unfolding events. The discovery of the rogue Stray, hunting a wild tabby, adds a layer of urgency and danger, forcing the protagonist to confront threats both within and outside her Pride.

The narrative explores themes of justice, prejudice, and the complexities of werecat law. The protagonist's struggle against a system that seems determined to condemn her highlights the inherent flaws and biases within her society. The introduction of the rogue Stray and the vulnerable tabby adds a layer of moral complexity, forcing the protagonist to make difficult choices in the face of overwhelming odds.

The relationship with Marc continues to be a central element of the story, providing both support and a source of tension. Their dynamic, now tested by the protagonist's legal troubles and the looming threat of the Stray, adds depth and emotional resonance to the narrative.

As with the previous installments, "Pride" offers a compelling story that kept me engaged. The plot twists and turns were intriguing, and I was genuinely invested in the protagonist's fight for survival. However, my frustration with the writing style continues to mount. It remains functional, but lacks the polish and artistry that would elevate the reading experience. At this point, I'm seriously debating whether I can continue with the series, as the repetitive prose and lack of stylistic flair are beginning to outweigh my enjoyment of the story itself. The story is good, but the way it is written is starting to be too much of a distraction.

Vincent maintains the fast-paced action and engaging narrative that characterized the previous books. The world-building continues to expand, revealing new layers of werecat society and the dangerous forces that threaten it. "Pride" is a pivotal installment in the series, but the author's writing style is making it increasingly difficult to fully appreciate the story's merits.

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Morgana Steele

Old books, my happy place. Dreaming of adding my own stories to those cherished shelves. Working towards that goal, one word at a time, embracing the vulnerability. Join the adventure!

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