The Whispering Shadow
: A Boy, a Ghost, and the Priest Who Saved Him
In the sleepy town of Briarwood, young Luke had always been curious about the old manor at the end of Mill Street. It had been abandoned for as long as anyone could remember, its windows shattered, its gates rusted, and its front yard overtaken by vines. Yet, it called to him.
One evening, after an argument with his parents, Luke decided to venture into the manor. He snuck past the rusted gates and tiptoed across the overgrown garden. The moment he stepped through the door, a cold draft swept through the hall, and the faintest whisper echoed in his ears. It was a voice, soft and sorrowful, but it felt like it was pulling him deeper into the shadows.
Luke explored the manor, drawn to a dimly lit room at the back. As he entered, the temperature plummeted. The whispering grew louder, and he could make out the words: "Help me..."
Suddenly, the room became darker, and a pale figure materialized before him—a ghostly woman, her face twisted in anguish. Her eyes locked with his, and she reached out, her cold fingers grazing his arm. Frozen with fear, Luke could barely breathe as the room seemed to close in around him.
That night, Luke could not escape the haunting. The spirit visited him in his dreams, and each time, the whispers grew louder, urging him to come back to the manor. Fear gripped his heart, and he began to lose sleep. His parents noticed his distress, but Luke could not bring himself to tell them the truth. The ghost had already marked him.
Desperate, he confided in Father Michael, the town's priest, who had heard rumors of the haunted manor. Father Michael had dealt with many spirits over the years, and he agreed to help. He arrived at Luke’s house the next evening, a solemn expression on his face.
Together, they ventured back to the manor, the air thick with tension. Father Michael carried a wooden crucifix, a vial of holy water, and the ancient prayer book used in exorcisms. They made their way to the room where Luke had first encountered the ghost.
As Father Michael began to chant in Latin, the ghost appeared again, its form flickering in and out of reality. The whispers turned to cries of agony, and the air grew colder still. Luke, trembling, stood by Father Michael, who continued his prayers unwaveringly.
The spirit wailed, and for a moment, Luke feared the worst. But then, as Father Michael raised the crucifix, a burst of light illuminated the room, and the ghost let out a final, anguished scream before vanishing into the shadows.
The air in the room lightened, and the coldness lifted. Father Michael lowered the crucifix, and Luke felt a weight lift from his chest. The haunting was over.
Later, Father Michael explained that the spirit was once a woman who had died tragically in the house, her soul restless and seeking peace. Thanks to the priest’s intervention, she was finally able to move on.
Luke never forgot the terrifying experience, but he learned that there was always light—even in the darkest of places. The town of Briarwood could rest easy once again, and so could Luke, now free from the whispers of the past.
About the Creator
Siddhant sharma
I'm a artist and I wrote just for fun only.


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