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The last promise

"A Promise Written in the Stars, a Legacy of Love"

By Austin Ubah Published about a year ago 2 min read
"A Promise Written in the Stars, a Legacy of Love"

The hospital room was quiet, except for the steady hum of the machines keeping Clara alive. Her frail body lay motionless on the bed, her once vibrant eyes now clouded with the weight of time. Beside her sat Alex, her grandson, clutching her hand as if holding on to her would keep her tethered to this world a little longer.

“Tell me again,” Clara whispered, her voice barely audible.

Alex leaned closer. “Tell you what, Grandma?”

“About the stars,” she said, her lips curving into a faint smile. “You always loved talking about the stars.”

Alex smiled through the tears threatening to spill. When he was a child, Clara would take him to the meadow behind her house, where they’d lie on a blanket under the endless sky. She’d point out constellations and weave stories about them, her voice filled with wonder.

“You said the stars are like memories,” Alex said softly. “Even when people are gone, their light stays with us. Forever.”

Clara closed her eyes, a single tear slipping down her cheek. “Promise me something, Alex.”

“Anything,” he said, his voice cracking.

“When I’m gone… don’t let the stars fade. Keep looking up. Keep remembering.”

Alex swallowed hard. “I promise,” he whispered.

Clara passed away that night, her hand still in Alex’s, her face peaceful. Her funeral was small but filled with people whose lives she had touched. Alex gave a eulogy, sharing her love for the stars and her belief that memories, like starlight, never truly faded.

Afterward, Alex found himself wandering to the meadow where they used to stargaze. The blanket was still there, folded neatly in the corner of the small shed. He spread it out on the grass and lay down, staring up at the vast expanse of sky. The stars blinked back at him, their light steady and eternal.

Months turned into years, but Alex never forgot his promise. Every time life felt overwhelming, he’d return to the meadow, lying under the stars and remembering Clara’s stories. He began sharing those stories with others—his friends, his future children, and anyone who would listen.

One evening, years later, Alex brought his own daughter, Lily, to the meadow for the first time. She was only six, but her curiosity about the world was boundless, just like Clara’s had been.

“Daddy,” Lily said, pointing up at the sky. “Tell me about the stars.”

Alex smiled, his heart swelling with both love and longing. He pulled her close and began to speak, his voice carrying the stories Clara had once told him. He spoke of Orion’s strength, Cassiopeia’s vanity, and the eternal light of the stars.

As they lay there together, Alex felt a deep sense of peace. Clara’s last promise had become his life’s mission, her memory woven into every story he told.

And as Lily drifted off to sleep under the starlit sky, Alex whispered, “Don’t worry, Grandma. I’ll keep looking up. I’ll keep remembering.”

The stars above seemed to twinkle a little brighter, their light a gentle reminder that some promises are forever.

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