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The Eternal Story: A Lantern That Remembers

The village of Eldermere had one law

By Gideon JamesPublished 9 months ago 3 min read

The village of Eldermere had one law—the lantern must always burn.

No one questioned it, not the elders, not the children, not even the scholars who passed through, seeking to unravel the mysteries of the ancient town. The lantern stood at the heart of the village, suspended from an iron post in the town square. Its flame never flickered, never wavered, and—most impossibly—never died.

Legends whispered that the lantern held the soul of the first storyteller, a man named Callidus. He had wandered the world, collecting tales, speaking truths wrapped in myth. When he grew old and weary, he came to Eldermere, where he lit a single lantern with the last of his breath and vowed:

"So long as this light endures, stories will never die."

Centuries passed, but the flame burned on.

Every year, on the eve of the solstice, the villagers gathered around the lantern. A chosen elder would speak the oldest tale known—the Story of the First Light. It was a ritual of remembrance, a promise to uphold the power of stories.

But on the year of Eldermere’s thousandth solstice, something changed.

The flame flickered.

It was the first time in a millennium that the lantern had faltered. Gasps filled the air. The elder chosen to speak that night, a woman named Marisol, stepped forward with a steadying breath.

She pressed her palm against the iron post and began:

"Before time had a name, there was a man who carried the world’s stories on his back..."

As she spoke, the villagers leaned in, waiting for the familiar tale to steady the flame. But then, the wind shifted.

The lantern dimmed.

A murmur rippled through the crowd. Never before had the story failed to fuel the flame. Marisol hesitated, her voice faltering. The silence was heavy, unnatural.

And then—

A voice rose from the darkness.

"You do not tell the truth."

A figure stepped forward, wrapped in a cloak of midnight, his face obscured by a deep hood. His presence was unnerving, ancient. The villagers shrank back as his voice, rich and deep, carried through the square.

"The story you tell is incomplete," he said.

Marisol straightened. "Who are you?"

The figure did not answer. Instead, he reached a hand toward the lantern, and in an instant, the flame blazed. It was no longer steady—it roared, casting long shadows that danced wildly over the square.

"You have forgotten the price of the lantern," he said.

Marisol’s heart pounded. "The price?"

The stranger nodded. "Callidus did not simply give his breath to light the lantern. He gave his soul. And the flame has burned because the world still remembers him. But now..."

His eyes—deep, endless pools of time—met hers.

"You have let his story fade."

A cold dread settled over the crowd. They had repeated the tale for centuries, but had they truly remembered? Or had they reduced it to mere tradition, words spoken without belief?

The stranger raised a single, pale hand. The lantern shuddered. Its flame flickered like a dying breath.

Marisol knew then who he was.

He was Callidus.

Not a ghost, not a man, but something in between—an echo, a guardian of his own legend. And now, the village had failed him.

Marisol dropped to her knees before the lantern, her voice rising with newfound conviction.

"Before time had a name, there was a man who carried the world’s stories on his back..."

But this time, she did not recite. She told.

She spoke of Callidus as a man—not just a legend. She described his wanderings, his sacrifice, his final breath that had given the world an undying light. She remembered him, honored him.

And as she did, the lantern’s flame stilled.

It grew stronger, steadier. The shadows no longer writhed, and the weight of forgotten things lifted from the air.

The stranger—Callidus—watched for a long moment. Then, with the faintest smile, he stepped back into the darkness.

And was gone.

The villagers stood in awed silence, their eyes fixed on the eternal lantern. Its flame was bright once more. But they now understood the truth:

A story only lives as long as those who tell it.

And so, in Eldermere, the lantern still burns—so long as it is remembered.

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Gideon James

Meet Gideon O. James an up coming author known for its captivating and thought-provoking novels. born and raised in the central region of Nigeria, I draws inspiration from the rugged beauty of my environment.

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