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The Last Train to Forever

When love arrives in the blink of an eye, the heart knows it’s found its home.

By Sazia Afreen SumiPublished about a year ago 5 min read
The Last Train to Forever
Photo by Dominic Kurniawan Suryaputra on Unsplash

It was a night like any other, the kind of evening that carries the weight of unspoken stories and the stillness of a world winding down. The streets of the city glowed beneath the dim yellow lights, their reflections stretching across the slick pavement. Above, the sky had turned soft, velvety indigo, the stars flickering lazily as if they, too, were ready to call it a day. But for Emma, it was anything but an ordinary evening.

She had missed the last bus home, and now, standing on the platform at the train station, she was wishing she’d paid a little more attention to the time. She was tired—mentally, emotionally, physically. The week had been a blur of work deadlines, family obligations, and the kind of endless running around that made her feel like she was always two steps behind. The last thing she needed was another inconvenience, but here she was, waiting for the final train to take her out of the city.

The station was quieter than usual, most commuters have long since gone home. Only a few people lingered, all absorbed in their world. Emma leaned against a pillar, scrolling mindlessly through her phone, tapping her foot impatiently as the clock on the wall ticked slowly forward. The train was late, of course.

She was about to sigh when she felt a sudden shift in the air—something she couldn’t quite put into words, but something that made her look up.

And there he was.

Standing at the opposite end of the platform, his figure illuminated by the faint light of the overhead bulbs, he seemed as much a part of the night as the stars themselves. He was dressed simply, in a dark jacket and jeans, with his hands tucked into his pockets as if he too was waiting for something that wasn’t quite here yet. His hair, dark and tousled, caught the light in such a way that it seemed almost like it was glowing.

Emma wasn’t sure what made her look at him so intently. Perhaps it was the way the night wrapped itself around him, or how his presence seemed to fill the space in the station. Or maybe it was the way he was standing, as though waiting for something—someone.

It took her a moment to realize she was staring, and in that moment, her heart gave a small, inexplicable leap.

She quickly looked down at her phone, as if that would make her stop feeling the strange pull toward him. She’d always been the practical type, never one to believe in fate or love at first sight. But that feeling, that undeniable warmth creeping up her neck, was not something she could explain away.

The train still hadn’t arrived, and Emma found herself glancing up again. He was still there, and this time, their eyes met across the distance.

For a fleeting moment, the world around her seemed to pause. The rumble of the city, the hum of the train tracks, and the cold, distant chatter of a few late-night stragglers all fell away. The space between them collapsed, and in that instant, it felt as though time had folded into itself. The air between them crackled with something unspoken, and Emma’s breath hitched.

She quickly looked away, but the feeling lingered, hovering in her chest like a secret that she didn’t know how to keep.

The train arrived a few minutes later, breaking the spell. People shifted, moving in a slow wave as the doors opened with a hiss of air. Emma, still feeling the strange flutter in her chest, boarded the train, her head spinning with thoughts that didn’t make sense.

She found an empty seat by the window, but before she could settle in, she heard a voice.

“I'm sorry

Her heart skipped again as she looked up, and there he was, standing right next to her, the same deep, knowing look in his eyes.

“I’m sorry to bother you,” he said, his voice low and warm, “but this might sound strange, but I feel like I’ve seen you before.”

Emma blinked, caught off guard by his sudden approach. She hadn’t even realized he’d gotten on the train.

“I’m not sure,” she replied, laughing nervously. “I don’t think I’ve ever met you.”

He hesitated, a small smile tugging at his lips. “No, no, I don’t mean it like that. I just… I don’t know. I’ve been staring at you for the last ten minutes, and there’s something familiar about you. I don’t know what it is. I know it’s weird, but… do you ever get that feeling?”

She smiled back, despite herself. The sensation was overwhelming, a strange mix of recognition and something deeper that she couldn’t quite place.

“Yeah,” she said softly, her voice a little breathless. “I know exactly what you mean.”

He leaned against the door frame, still looking at her with that intense gaze, and for a moment, Emma felt as though the entire world had narrowed down to this singular point in time, this one shared moment with a stranger on a late-night train.

“Emma,” she replied, shaking it. His hand was warm, and firm, and the brief touch felt strangely comforting.

They both sat in the same car, each lost in their thoughts, but somehow always circling the same idea: What was this?

The train moved through the quiet streets, the rhythmic clatter of the wheels a quiet backdrop to the unspoken connection between them. Emma couldn’t stop sneaking glances at him, wondering if he felt the same way she did. The feeling was so strong, so undeniable, it almost frightened her. She wasn’t one for whimsical notions, but in this moment, in the soft hum of the night, she couldn’t deny that something had shifted in her world.

As the train neared her stop, Jake stood up and moved to the door. He turned back to her one last time.

“Hey,” he said, his voice hesitant. “I know this is crazy, but… would you want to grab a coffee sometime? I know we don’t know each other, but I feel like I’d regret it if I didn’t ask.”

Emma’s heart was pounding now, her palms suddenly clammy. She could feel her hesitation, the rational side of her trying to pull her back to the safety of distance. But she ignored it. Because at that moment, the only thing that mattered was that pull, that inexplicable, magnetic pull toward him.

“Yes,” she said, her voice quiet but firm. “I’d like that.”

Jake’s eyes lit up, a wide, genuine smile spreading across his face. “Great,” he said, scribbling something on a piece of paper and handing it to her. “Here’s my number. Call me anytime.”

Emma nodded, taking the paper, and feeling her chest expand with a mixture of excitement and disbelief.

She watched as he stepped off the train at the next station, the doors sliding shut behind him. As the train continued its journey into the night, Emma held the paper in her hands, the sensation of his presence still lingering like a promise.

For the first time in a long time, Emma felt that rare, unmistakable thing—hope.

A love at first a sight story that reminds us that sometimes, the most unexpected encounters leave the deepest imprints on our hearts.

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About the Creator

Sazia Afreen Sumi

I craft stories that delve into love's many facets—romantic, unrequited, and lasting—plus other intriguing themes. Discover tales that resonate!

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  • Soma Ahmedabout a year ago

    Good.

  • Raushan Miraabout a year ago

    Excellent

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