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Seven Proud Sisters

Bound by love, divided by pride

By Alam khanPublished 3 months ago 3 min read

Once upon a time, in a valley surrounded by silver hills, lived seven sisters—each as beautiful as they were different. They were known throughout the land as the Daughters of Elara, named after their late mother, a woman of wisdom and kindness.

But while their mother had been known for her humility, her daughters were known for their pride.

The eldest, Alina, was strong and confident. She believed leadership was her birthright. The second, Bella, was clever, often using her words as weapons. The third, Cara, was graceful and adored for her charm. The fourth, Dara, was fierce and impatient, quick to anger and quick to forgive. The fifth, Ella, was quiet but stubborn. The sixth, Fiona, loved beauty more than truth. And the youngest, Giselle, though gentle, often imitated her sisters’ pride to feel equal among them.

They lived in their grand home atop the hill, surrounded by wealth their father had left behind. And though they shared everything—the same roof, the same meals, and the same name—they rarely shared peace.

Each sister wanted to be seen as the greatest.

When guests came to visit, they competed for compliments. When festivals arrived, they argued over who looked best. Even their laughter had an edge to it, sharp and proud.

One day, an old woman knocked on their door. Her clothes were tattered, and her voice trembled as she spoke.

“Kind daughters,” she said, “I am hungry. Could you spare a bit of bread?”

Alina, the eldest, frowned. “We are not a charity,” she said.

Bella whispered, “Look at her rags—she could frighten the guests.”

One by one, the sisters turned away—except for Giselle, the youngest.

Quietly, she went to the kitchen, brought a piece of bread, and placed it in the old woman’s hands.

The woman looked at her, eyes shining. “Thank you, child,” she said. “Your heart will guide the others—when the storm comes.”

Before Giselle could ask what she meant, the woman vanished, leaving behind a faint scent of jasmine.

That night, a storm unlike any other struck the valley. The wind howled, lightning tore the sky, and thunder rolled over the mountains. When morning came, their grand home stood in ruins. The seven sisters had lost everything—clothes, jewels, even their father’s treasures.

For the first time, pride had nothing to cling to.

They sought shelter in a nearby village, but the people, remembering their arrogance, turned them away. Hungry and humbled, they wandered until they found a small abandoned cottage near the river.

Alina, who had once ordered servants, now gathered firewood.

Bella, the talker, learned to listen.

Cara used her grace to comfort the others.

Dara learned patience through hardship.

Ella, who had once been quiet, began to sing to lift their spirits.

Fiona, once obsessed with beauty, began planting flowers to bring color back to their lives.

And Giselle—the one who had shown kindness first—became the heart that held them together.

Days turned into weeks, and though they had less, their hearts grew lighter. They learned to cook with what they had, laugh without competition, and live without envy. The house slowly filled with warmth again—this time, not from wealth, but from love.

One spring morning, while Giselle was watering the flowers, a familiar figure appeared on the path. It was the same old woman. But now, she glowed faintly, her cloak shimmering like sunlight on water.

“Do you remember me?” she asked.

Giselle nodded. “You came to our door. I gave you bread.”

The woman smiled. “You did more than that, child. You shared compassion when pride ruled your home. I gave your sisters a storm—not as punishment, but as a gift.”

The sisters, who had gathered behind Giselle, bowed their heads in shame.

“We have learned,” Alina said softly. “We once thought pride made us strong. But kindness... it holds us together.”

The old woman’s eyes sparkled. “Then your mother’s spirit lives on in you.”

With that, she raised her hand, and the ruins of their old home on the hill were restored—not in gold and luxury, but as a humble, beautiful dwelling, filled with light.

When the sisters returned, they noticed something magical. The walls seemed warmer, the air gentler, as if love itself had built the place.

From that day forward, the seven proud sisters became known as the Seven Gentle Sisters. They helped the villagers, shared what they had, and opened their home to travelers in need.

And when people asked how they found such peace, Giselle would smile and say,

“We lost everything but found ourselves

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