Melody's at Midnight (Final)
Punk Rock Pop Song
Here's a little experimental song I wrote. It's not my usual genre but I enjoyed creating it! Let me know what you think!
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Verse One
Let me tell a story about a girl I used to know
Let me say I'm sorry cause played her on the low
Don't wanna disclose but I put on quite a show
She started getting close so I had to let her go
Almost every night, we would stay up every night
Star's shining bright, fucking in the moonlight
All was alright, lost cause out of sight
We would never ever fight, but something wasn't right
Twilight in the dark, meeting up without care
Throw the car in park, run my finger's through your hair
Lighting up the spark, but the fire wasn't there
Two broken hearts, we thought desire could repair
Bridge
Nooooooo-ohhhh-oh
We'll never know-uh-oh
Whoaaaaaaa-ohhhh-oh
Please let me go-uh-oh
Chorus
She was my everything
She was my saving grace
She was my lonely night
She was my happy place
I took her out to nowhere lying underneath the stars
Played her like a fiddle but it only broke her heart
Verse Two
She ain't even my ex, but we were smokin' together
You could smell the hot sex, and the dope on my sweater
Sending me a text, with the hope of whatever
But I couldn't go on, livin' broken together.
I still hold her forever, Never letting her go
Her memory lives on, in the back of my soul
Hitting from the bong, and packing a bowl
Knowing it was wrong, now I'm back in control.
Still that girl's living in the back of mind
I was too juvenile now the stars have aligned
She sitting with a smile in my head looking fine
In an alternate world I could tell you she's mine
Bridge
Nooooooo-ohhhh-oh
We'll never know-uh-oh
Whoaaaaaaa-ohhhh-oh
Please let me go-uh-oh
Chorus
She was my everything
She was my saving grace
She was my lonely night
She was my happy place
I took her out to nowhere lying underneath the stars
Played her like a fiddle but it only broke her heart
Bridge
Nooooooo-ohhhh-oh
We'll never know-uh-oh
Whoaaaaaaa-ohhhh-oh
Please let me go-uh-oh
Nooooooo-ohhhh-oh
*We'll never know*
Whoaaaaaaa-ohhhh-oh
*Please let me go*
(*Talking*)
Outro
I'm bad at love, what can I say?
We had our fun, but I cannot stay
I love the way you move and the games you play
But if you take it too far then I'll walk away
I'm bad at love, what can I say?
We had our fun, but I cannot stay
I love the way you move and the games you play
But if you take it too far then I'll walk away
[Chorus]
She was my everything
She was my saving grace
She was my lonely night
She was my happy place
I took her out to nowhere lying underneath the stars
Played her like a fiddle but it only broke her heart
She was my everything
She was my saving Grace
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I'll drop the link to the song when I get it recorded!
Here are some more songs I wrote:
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Dylan
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Comments (3)
Dylan, I like the rhyme scheme and rhythm of this one. But most of all I like that you had fun with this piece, I can see it in your work! This was an interesting piece to publish here! Nicely doen, Dylan!
Love it! Great lyrics! Yes- looking forward to hearing it recorded cause I was singing it to my own tune and I’m pretty sure I botched it 😂 great work as always, Dylan! I see I’ve missed a couple others of yours-I’ll have to catch up! 💫
Yeah, that works. I like the different angle on a relationship that fails. Keeps things interesting and at least your character is willing to accept his (or her) responsibility!