Short and snappy lyrics, light rap with a slamming energy, delivering freedom.
Maybe a Maren Morris style.
Acoustic guitar and harmonies start the verse, building into a heavy drum beat for the chorus.
Vocals are forceful (punchy)on lines 1,3,5,7 with a long, drawn and haunting hollowness for the 2,4,6th and last line.
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VERSE ONE:
A burning cigarette hangs from your lips
Still, nooooo where close to your toxic
You look at me with hands on your hips
Tryingggg to sell your logic
You’re throwing shade on my sunny day
Using AI for a pretty face
The first time was your last mistake
It’s my chance to make a getawayyyyy
And I’m ghosting…..yeah, I’m ghosting you
**
CHORUS:
Hey now, ya got me caught up in a fake out
Come on strong and then you fade out
Fill my head full of wanderlust and self doubt
**drums and guitar buildup **
I hate those words out of your mouth
Im safe now, I finally found my way out
Lost and Found in my hometown
Picked me up and let me down
Now, I’m breaking free, far from your shakedown
**
HOOK:
You’re sooooo selfish, selfish, selfish (echoing)
**
BRIDGE:
Such a smooth operator, Making me wish, that we’d never been together. You changed love, even faster than the weather, but I’m only getting better gonna leave ya on a supernova
**
CHORUS:
Hey now, ya got me caught up in a fake out
Come on strong and then you fade out
Fill my head full of wanderlust and self doubt
**drums and guitar buildup **
I hate those words out of your mouth
Im safe now, I finally found my way out
Lost and Found in my hometown
Picked me up and let me down
Now, I’m breaking free, far from your shakedown
**
VERSE TWO:
Hey baby, you’re gonna wanna sit down
It’s my turn to tell you how it goes now
I’ve had my fill, I’d like to say I had fun
But I won’t lie, it’s over baby, I’m done
**
CHORUS:
Hey now, ya got me caught up in a fake out
Come on strong and then you fade out
Fill my head full of wanderlust and self doubt
**drums and guitar buildup **
I hate those words out of your mouth
Im safe now, I finally found my way out
Lost and Found in my hometown
Picked me up and let me down
Now, I’m breaking free, far from your shakedown
**
OUTRO:
Maybe one day you’ll figure it out
And true love will open your eyes
But one day is too late for me now
I’ve already gone babe, I’m well on my way
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Good boy daisy was the music I was listening to for inspiration. I hope you enjoy it
I had trouble downloading the video. I will add it soon. Gotta get this submitted
Thanks for reading
Some rambling to meet the word count.
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every other weekend
like a blackbird taking flight
I find myself awaiting
for the time that you’ll arrive
shared between two houses
twice the family, twice the love
blended with new spouses
for a life that you deserve
they say that with the distance
hearts grow fonder
my love never changes
just in case you wondered
** One more. Unfinished
You’re planted under my skin
Like the veins of a flower
You end where I begin
Fully rooted in power
Pure poetry, set in motion
A functional, isometry
Individualized potion
Worshiped religiosity
A baptized devotion
Resurrected in beauty
Walking upon the ocean
Salty on my skin
In perfectly sized portions
About the Creator
Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition
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Comments (6)
This will be in my head all day <3 Love it
Great song you have here.
Word count met (I'm assuming). Excellent lyrics, but I want a tune. I gotta be able to hear it & jam to it, m'lady, lol.
Gee! Lyrics! This is very cool! 💕
Well written well done dear
Great lyrics! I’d be signing it if I was alone!