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Unfinished

A love story

By Mother CombsPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Unfinished
Photo by Abdulla Abeedh on Unsplash

Take my hand Let me lead you To a land That is new And grand With a sea of blue And a beach of white sand Created just for you

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Mother Combs

Come near, sit a spell, and listen to tales of old as I sit and rock by my fire. I'll serve you some cocoa and cookies as I tell you of the time long gone by when your Greats-greats once lived.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago

    Awww, this was so sweet and lovely! Beautiful poem!

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    I love the contrast of the newness with the ancient yew.

  • Love this!

  • Jazzy 2 years ago

    Oh this was gorgeous 😍

  • Nice Piece ❤️📝😊🍂😎

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