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Love in 50 Words
By Mother CombsPublished 11 months ago • Updated 7 months ago • 1 min read
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Round and round we go We’ve been on this ride before Where we stop no one knows Such a surprise is in-store So come and grab a seat
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Become a paid subscriber to get access.So lovely ♦️♦️♦️♦️
The ride where it's not about the ride but the companion who goes with you.
A innocence of feeling like a child again. So good
This has such a fun, whimsical rhythm—like a love story spinning on a carnival ride! That brass ring line? Perfect.
Very nicely done!
‘Just settle your ass!’ Hahah. Fun. There’s always that one horse that looks borderline terrifying like on the right! 🐴 😄
Awesome work
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I thought of a different kinda ride 😝😝😝😝😝 Also, in this line "Were we stop no one knows", did you mean where* we stop?