The Birth of Water
A mythmaker tale.
Long ago, when Earth was dull and barren, Giants roamed the terrain in search of meaning. Born of magma and flame, they emerged from the crust of our planet to wake it from its eternal slumber and bring life to its lifeless land.
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Ashley Lima
I think about writing more than I write, but call myself a writer as opposed to a thinker.
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Become a paid subscriber to get access.This right here "They were not meant to find the answer, they were meant to find themselves." Great entry.
I read “Appalachia” and was thrilled!! Neat concept, simply told. 👏🙂
"Water was born from their fear" I love that line! The giants becoming mountains caught me a little off guard, but it fits so perfectly with the story! I love how they're giants of rock and magma, mirroring how the mountains formed of those things thanks to tectonic shifts. This is a truly masterful story! Best of luck in the myth maker challenge :)
What a beautiful tale! You did a masterful job with this entry. It all flows seamlessly.
Beautifully written! I was also thinking about giants for the myth somehow but yours would be a hard act to follow! It sounds like a true creation myth from a real ancient civilization. Good job!
Whoaaaa, this was so creative! Poor giants. I loved your story!
I like how they roam the terrain searching for meaning, and the power of tears brings genesis to things. Compact and hitting the legendary tone in a grand way, very well crafted.
great story :)
Very creative! I liked how the giants' names morphed into mountain ranges.
Amazing story... seeking Giants and their tears... a beautiful write 👏Pernoste