Girl with the Pearl Earring
A painted prose submission

She was a mystery, consumed with wit and charm. An enigma. A girl who was seen by many, yet known by no one. She liked it that way. Keeping people guessing kept her on her toes.
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Ashley Lima
I think about writing more than I write, but call myself a writer as opposed to a thinker.

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Become a paid subscriber to get access.Excellent! I love Vermeer, and you really brought a new dimension of subjectivity to this work! If you have a moment, I would be honored if you would check out my entry "Finding the Wings: Painted from Life." Great work!
Beautifully written story, and the protagonist is very real in her melancholy. The last paragraph feels like a bit of an odd ending as compared to the rest of it. Perhaps you intend that she has actually died (unclear what "death she left behind" could mean) or that she developed magical powers. If it's the latter, a little foreshadowing might help it fit a little better or else extend the transition to fantasy at the end a little. I love that this really made me think, and it's so good that I wanted to give you this little feedback. 💙Anneliese
An interesting take on the image. Lovely story!